Rough Cut & Feed Back from Fellow Students

After showing our rough cut, we got some constructive feedback from our fellow students. Some where that:

. The Titles where brilliant and seemed very professional
. That our soundtrack was brilliant and compliments very well with the titles.

However, we were told that:

. The main title was too quick and needed to be longer so that it can be read properly.
. Some scenes were too dark.
. Story very unclear
. That the cocaine should be shown more.

Nevertheless, these constructive criticisms and compliments well help us get the best of our work!

To justify the view that the storyline is unclear, we intended on setting our film opening like this so that we wouldn't give away to much of our storyline to our audience.

Estate Of Mind Rough Cut from Jemma Goulds on Vimeo.