Thursday, 18 March 2010

Rough Cut & Feed Back from Fellow Students

After showing our rough cut, we got some constructive feedback from our fellow students. Some where that:

. The Titles where brilliant and seemed very professional
. That our soundtrack was brilliant and compliments very well with the titles.

However, we were told that:

. The main title was too quick and needed to be longer so that it can be read properly.
. Some scenes were too dark.
. Story very unclear
. That the cocaine should be shown more.

Nevertheless, these constructive criticisms and compliments well help us get the best of our work!

To justify the view that the storyline is unclear, we intended on setting our film opening like this so that we wouldn't give away to much of our storyline to our audience.


Estate Of Mind Rough Cut from Jemma Goulds on Vimeo.

Sunday, 14 March 2010

Soundtrack

The soundtrack for Estate Of Mind is based around a hip-hop/grime theme as this fits the nature of the film opening and suits perfectly. Rather than finding copyrighted music and asking permission for it to be used, I decided that it would be better that I go forth and produce the soundtrack for my team. In order for me to do this, I needed to do research into the hip-hop and grime genres, so that I could have some ideas in terms of how a hip-hop/grime produced track would sound, and different techniques I could use when producing the track.

Here are some examples of tracks I studied and tried to emulate into my work:





To produce the track, I used a programme named Cubase. Cubase is a programme that provides all the different sounds and allows you to make your own original songs from scratch, without any pre-programme loops or samples.

When producing the song, I added in certain instruments to play on the effect and theme of our opening sequence. For instance, the orchestral chords emphasise the drama & tension in our film opening that depicts that will happen in the rest of the film, while the sharp snares emphasises the dramatic, sharp tone to our film, as well as the theme of danger. The tempo, which is fast, emphasises the the fast paced lives that the characters in our film lead, as well as complimenting the hip-hop/grime theme.







Here is the finished soundtrack to Estate Of Mind! :D

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Friday, 12 March 2010

Production Logo



Our production logo is called Y.O.A (Young Original Africans). To create our production logo, we used Adobe After Effetcs. Our original colour choice was blue as we thought it would be more reasonable to have different shades of blue than to have different colours and make things too colourful. However, after this had been done, we took a second look and decided that having just blue gave our production logo a very monotonous feel to it and there resulted in mixing in white. To put the finishing touch to it, we added an animation of electric shocks in the background to make it more interesting and give it a sharp feel.




Our production logo in progress.

Thursday, 11 March 2010

Meetings

Meeting 1

During our first meeting for our project, we initially decided to create an African Comedy as we thought it would be interesting and different, as well as original. We planned to call the comedy Tunde Comes to England. This film opening was to show Tunde starting school in England for the first time, but however the day turns out horribly for him. Tunde was to be played by Terry, and we were to include his mother (played by Josephine) in the very first few scenes. To make everything realistic, we dressed the characters up in African attire, as Tunde would be picked on because of his attire as well as his struggle to understand the English school ways. To fuel our inspiration for our opening sequence, we looked through many different African comedies, and a popular choice amongst the four of us was the Nigerian comedy, Mr Ibu, which was our major source of inspiration. It was during this point that I decided to take the role of editor of our footage, once it was filmed.

Meeting 2

During the second meeting, we planned what Tunde and his mother were going to wear, aswell as the locations we would film. Our locations were: outside the school entrance, inside the school building by the reception, and in a classroom full of children. Once we had planned all of this, we then decided that immediately we would film the following day. During the process of filming, we all thought that the idea was going really well and that we had done well to get our ideas as far as we thought we wouldn't go when we first came up with the idea. However, within a couple of days after filming, we looked back at what we had filmed and realised that what we had filmed was more like a sitcom rather than a film opening, and we thought that the idea was too silly to be a film opening. After some serious discussion, we as a group decided to scrap the entire idea of 'Tunde Comes To England', and therefore had to start from square one.

Meeting 3

After the failure of 'Tunde Comes To England', we were began to fell very unmotivated and uninspired and were starting to lose hope in what we as a group could come up with. However, days later, Josephine introduced the idea of us making a Drama inspired film opening, along the lines of Skins, but however with each character giving the audience an autobiographical spoken word insight of their life. Our original title for this was to be London Town, which was to be about a group of teenagers struggling with drug addictions and seeking help by going to council meetings. Our film opening was to show the group of teenagers in a drug meeting, then each character talking about their struggle with drugs and what life was like before they started with drugs, and also there were to be flashbacks of each character's lives as drug addicts. After we had filmed and edited, we were very pleased with the results. However, when we played it to our teacher, we were told that our film was 'crying out for different angles and shots'. For a second time, we decided to start everything from scratch once again, but we decided to keep the main storyline, however we dismissed the idea of the characters going to councilling.

Meeting 4

It was during this meeting that Terry decided to bring the idea of us basing our film opening towards the likes of Kidulthood, Adulthood and Bulletboy. It was also during this meeting that we decided 'London Town' wasn't the right name for our film opening. After going through a list of names that we came up with, we all disagreed with the names and struggled to find a suitable name for our film. Terry then came up with the name 'Estate Of Mind' after randomly making jokes out of the names we could use. After a lot of thought, we all decided that 'Estate Of Mind' was the right title for our film as it was a very clever title.

Josephine, being the driving force of the group, decided on the locations we would film and where particular scenes would be shot: for instance the establishing shot, the drug scene at her home, Myrin and Terry's confrontational scene at an Estate. I was offered to play a role in our film opening but I declined, preferring to take the role as the main editor, while assisting in helping Myrin & Terry film. Nevertheless, as well as Josephine, Terry & Myrin being the actors, it was decided that Terry would do the opening titles as well as credits, Myrin would do the the production logo, while Josephine helped edit and took charge in what scenes we would include and the ones that we would dismiss. During this meeting, Josephine had initially insisted for the soundtrack, a song that Terry had recorded many months ago as she thought it would fit our film and would be much easier than asking permission for an already existing song. However, I offered to produce the soundtrack for our team as I wanted to be more involved in our group and take a chance in doing multiple things. Also, I had first hand experience in producing music and that I believed that making the soundtrack for our team would benefit us a lot.

Tuesday, 9 March 2010

Costume list

Terry and the confrontation
Terry
  • White hat
  • black jackets
  • red hoodie
Myrin
  • black hood
  • pair of black gloves
  • Dark trousers
  • Dark trainers
Josephine (me)
  • Long shirt
  • Red bra
  • Tights
  • heavy Chains
Bianca (extra)
  • Skinny Jeanes
  • Greay top
Regina (extra)
  • Leggins
  • Long top
  • messy hair
Hidden package - Terry
  • black pouch
  • Locker
  • white hat
  • Dark clothing.

Monday, 8 March 2010

Storyboard


Sunday, 7 March 2010

Target Audience

Our film opening is mainly aimed at adolescents and young adults around the ages of 16 - 27 years of age. This is because people of that age group would find more interest in our film opening and would be able to relate to the themes such as gangs, violence etc., although they may not neccasirily indulge into these things. As other films such as Kidulthood, Bullet boy and Adulthood have had success in delivering these films to this particular audience, we assumed that aiming our film towards this audience would be more realistic and would work as our film opening goes along the same lines.

Saturday, 6 March 2010

Moodboard

Synopsis

Following the misguided track of two south London teenagers trapped and trying to leave the path that is soon leading them to destruction. Josephine a 17 year old mum how struggles to juggle college life motherhood and her excessive drug addiction, which is not proving so easy. her love for the killer meds soon makes her loose everything that she had loved and she is made to struggle with her beaten down self and try her hardest to build herself up whilst on the run from Abusive ex boyfriend/ personal drug dealer.

Terry a lost 17 year old who is trying break the stereotype that has led his life astray. He tries his hardest to break the mould but it is proven to have a stronger hold than he thought. Things start to get even more serious when he feels like he need to have a little more security and starts to carry weapons the life of grime get the better of him and he is left at a dead end that is until love comes to rescue him and he decides that it is time to prove his peers and society wrong. "Bad boys don't stay bad forever"

An Estate is not only a low class building it is a state of mind... Estate of mind